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This piece was completed in response to an assignment for my senior seminar class, where our theme over the course of the semester was "The Investigator." It now stands as ...

iheartbooks - Ah, thank you! That's probably my favorite compliment - that someone gets so caught up in a story that they just want more. Don't worry about not being ...

'Allo! I would absolutely love some feedback on my novella, Crazy Little Thing . So far just the first three chapters are up, and I have no idea when the ...

Hi snail! The quality of these photos is just gorgeous - what kind of camera do you use? (I'm in the market for a DSLR :)) The expression in the ...

Hey there MamaLama! English assignments gone rogue are the best kinds, in my opinion. Half the time they end up being a lot more interesting and well-written than your best ...

Hello there Miss Ellie Bryn :) I was really excited when I read the synopsis on your novel page; ever since I read Alice Sebold's The Lovely Bones , I've ...

Hey Pixie! So you've got some great ideas floating around here, but what you really need is some work on the execution of those ideas. Here are my main suggestions: ...

So pretty! What program(s) did you use to make this?

Hey Bhayden - You've already gotten some really good, specific feedback above, so I'll just add that I think it would help a lot for you to really think about ...

Same goes for me! Rosey has the dl on this place though, so if you ask me I might end up asking her anyway :P Hope you're liking everything so ...

Hey Lumi - The last thing I am is a poetry expert, so take these comments with a grain of salt. I'm not really sure what you're going for here. ...

Crazy Little Thing III * Come out, Virginia, don’t let me wait, You Catholic girls start much too late. Sooner or later it comes down to fate; I might as ...

woohoo Justagirl! Get after it! :D This one's from my 21st, post-wine but pre-shots. hehe.

Hey, welcome to the site! I got more serious about writing in 9th grade too, which is actually when I joined YWS. I've made some awesome friends here and really ...

Right now the two I'm working on are completely self-indulgent. I started Refuge ages ago to sate my obsession with the Roman Empire. I do research only as it interests ...