ArcticMonkey

Hello, I enjoyed this piece very much. Madika is really cool, you explained his characteristics nicely. Although, I hope in your next chapters, you write more about him. I know ...

Ok, I don't really have an exact order for these books, because i just can't choose!! However, these are my all time favourites: Of Mice And Men Alice In Wonderland ...

Hello, I think this poem seemed very thought-out even though you did it in two minutes. It reminded me of that song 'Imagine' by John Lennon. Your imaginationn is great! ...

Hello, I enjoyed this piece very much! Your creativity is excellent, and this worked well for a short story. It's cool how you used Greek Gods like Zeus and Poseidon. ...

Ok, for starters, I personally love Luigi and he is my favourite Nintendo character, you are wise for drawing him! I like how you kind of did him screaming, like ...

Chapter 4 Cynthia left the area of the fairies, she followed King Dalas, and nothing exciting seemed to happen, so all she could do was think about her beloved cat, ...

Chapter 3 After Cynthia found out that she had had to go with King Dalas, she looked around. Because a cat, a talking cat just assumed that she would go ...

Chapter 2 King Dalas looked very positive, his yellow eyes shimmered a gold shade. Neither Cynthia nor King Dalas spoke, it all felt tranquil until King Dalas made a sudden ...

I have changed alot of things now, but still, it's not perfect. It's my first post so I'm not used to any of these things.

I think you have a very poetic way of writing, I like how you carefully picked your words as these were very detailed. :D I hope you continue, and WELL ...

Introduction One girl was unaware of what was coming ahead for her. What was going to strike her. How she was going to help, or fail. If she was going ...