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Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
9/10, i lol'd at this p.s. whoever gives my rating of my signature, I know it's pretty lame
Apr 18, 2010 -
Re: Change One Letter [2]
flee It took me so long to come up with that!
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
8/10 I don't know how to class this :P
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter & The Order Of The Pizza!
I did laugh alot at this, it was a very funny script. It was inventive, and imaginative, I can't really write a proper review for this (as I would not ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: My First Photos! :}
Hey GoldenQuill! (You reviewed my first ever piece of writing on YWS!) I really liked these...alot! 1. Some parts are kind of blurry, but it looks decent 2. I love ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: But I wanna review you! D:
Yeah, I have a fantacy novel, which is half-done... WOuld you critique it so far? Here is the link: The chapters are muddled up a bit, so it says: chapter ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Samantha
Hey Durriedog, The shading is very good, especially around the bottom of the face, leading into the neck. I like the eye as it's not shaded inside as I've sen ...
Apr 17, 2010 -
Re: Search For Tony Chapter 5
Chapter 5 As Cynthia began to move on, she heard a small rustle from a bush near by, this sound seemed familiar, probably from the time when King Dalas came ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: MysticalBlood's drawings and photo's
I like the detail in the drawings, and it looks like you didn't just do a quick scribble, you spent alot of time on this. The shaping of the tribal ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: The Inquisition of Trusts- Chapter One (First Submission)
Hey DUDEK 1794! Welcome to YWS! Ok, firstly, why is this in Historical Fiction? Is there something in the next chapters that makes it Historical Fiction? Anyway, let me start ...
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: The Resistance
Hey, I can tell you want this to carry on, so here goes: Name: Kiara Kuipers Age (16-21): 19 Gender: Female Appearence (Picture if possible): Kiara had dark red hair, ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Looking up at the Starry Sky
Hey Yirikko! I think that this poem was really good. i admit, at first I imagined a poem about the painting starry starry night by Vincent Van Gogh... Ever heard ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Forgot to make dinner.
Heya Fizza, I like it! Strong Points The way it is set out is interesting, and original. Weak Points Like Elinor said, it's just a bit vague and it has ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: The This, This Or That Questionnaire!
#1 - Australia #2 - Ginormous (big) #3 - Beach #4 - Fruit and nut #5 - Dream job #6 - Lay-in #7 - Shower #8 - ITV #9 - ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Traitors Get What They Deserve
Hello! The poem is a bit confusing to me, but don't worry, I still like it! The rythm kind of turns on and off, but most of my poems are ...
Apr 14, 2010