ArcticMonkey

Heya Rachel, here to review as requested!! Let me start by saying that this piece was wonderful, in the sense that the imagery was so clear to understand. It's quite ...

Hey there, Welcome to YWS!!! I too find it hard to finish stories unless there short stories. Lots of people do. I think that if you post what you've done ...

Done WW! For future reference could you include a link? Thanks! EDIT: I know it's in your signature now, but I didn't notice that earlier on

Heya there, WW! Here to review as requested!! Overall Impression: I have read the previous two chapters and I agree with a lot of others in saying that it is ...

Done! Anyone else?

Hey there MadWriter! *throws cnonfetti* Welcome to YWS!!! Here at YWS Most of us are mad writers! You say that you were good at writing as a kid, did you ...

Heya jemjive! 1. Oh wow, this is really gorgeous. Where was this photograph taken? I think it's really great. However, I'm not sure if this has to do with the ...

I did not write this! I found it on another website, and I found it very interesting, so I thought that I'd share it here. Do not give me any ...

Ok, here are my stats so far: Isaac Asimov Chuck Palahnuik Kurt Vonnegut Jane Austen Neil Gaiman Stephen King (2) James Joyce Stephanie Meyer Only heard of Jane Austen, Neil ...

Jessie This whole adventure so far was actually quite fun, I was really scared at first but it's all ok now. I have great new friends, well, apart from Claire. ...

Hey the screamandshout. Here to review as requested! The beginning is quite capturing as you didn’t reveal too much of the story and it leaves you thinking: what is she ...

Jessie I was getting so worried about not making it back in time. I mean even though I ignored my mother a lot, I still loved her. The charming young ...

Hello Deva. Welcome to YWS! What is the name of the other writing site that you are on? By the way, we call it critiquing and reviewing here, so don't ...

Hey there, Kah! Talked to you on chat recently, didn't I? Anyway, moving onto the review :wink: I absolutely adore the hair, I think you got it just right. the ...

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