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Re: Caleb's story, chapter four
Psudiname! I'm back, mwahahaahhaha First off, I'd like to point out that you've yet to make this into a novel on YWS. Nate has a video about it here , ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Caleb's story, chapter three
Hey. It's me again! Nitpicks and suggestions in the spoiler, as always! Caleb could not ever remember ever being this happy. His whole body was permeated with a n euphoria ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Caleb's story, chapter two
Hey, here to review again! Overall Impression: I don’t think I’ll need a Spoiler this time because I didn’t notice any grammar issues, well done! However, I know that grammar ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Caleb's story, chapter one
Here to review as requested! Hey 8) Overall Impression: You’ve paced this quite well, the beginning is a bit bland, however your ending is quite exciting. The characters are quite ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Shadow of the Dawn (Chapter 3)
Hey, WaitingForLife! Here to review as requested :) Overall Impression: I like your beginning, just describing Lizzy, and as for your end you could’ve used more of a cliff hanger ...
Dec 31, 2010 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
Awesome Ellie!
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: Who would Skandar Keynes prefer?
Alright. Why are you fighting? He is extremely *insert bad word* Both of you could do SO much better xD Trol trol I'm colourful
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Who would Skandar Keynes prefer?
you two should get over yourselves (soorry for spelling) When the day comes for Skan-man to decide we all know who he's going to go for.
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Welcome to the Reviewing Machine [OPEN]
Come on guys! I need to review to live!
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Paris
Hello Gomer! You're relatively new. I hope you're enjoying the site! Anyway, on with the review. First off, I think this piece belongs in the 'Other' section. I can see ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Craziest Kid-ster
Well, what I did was pretty epic. I was about 3 or 4. Basically, we went to the London Eye and we shared a pod with various people who could ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Greetings. ^ ^
Hey Sara! I'm Inbetweener, you can call me Tamara if you want. Welcome to YWS! Mwahahah *throws confetti* You're probably going to meet lots' more obssessive writers. Personally, I don't ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Untitled Photo (YWLJ possibly)
Another photo! This time taken with my new camera, a FujiFilm :) rsz_1rsz_11rsz_twig.jpg Enjoy :3
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Welcome to the Reviewing Machine [OPEN]
Done, and I hope you enjoyed! Who else wants a review??
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: You could have (edited)
Tweenie here to review as requested! Overall: I think that it flowed quite well, although sometimes it just didn’t seem very natural. Your grammar and spelling is generally great and ...
Dec 21, 2010