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  • Script » Realistic, Humor
    Re: The Guard

    Lol, this was definitely comedic. Your play on words was phenomenal. I've never really been a fan of this style of writing, but I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Corvo: Is ...

    Jun 17, 2021

  • Other » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Walking-Travel Writing attempt #1

    I liked this story a lot! It's very descriptive and scientifically accurate and overall very enjoyable to read. (I happen to like birds a lot myself) There is nothing quite ...

    Jun 17, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: When the Wind Blows 1.1

    This winter had been surprisingly harsh. Her mother had been spending more and more time outside, despite Kaylee’s constant pleading for her to stay inside and finally get warm. However, ...

    Jun 16, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature
    Re: LoaMR: Ch. III: Claire 1 (Reworked)

    So overall your story was filled with emotion, and you conveyed your points well. All I found were some very minor grammar mistakes. #1 "There had not been in Regenschloss ...

    Jun 16, 2021

  • Other » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Life is strange

    I want to write a review, but I'm not sure if I will be able to write enough words for that. It's a moving piece and I enjoyed it. All ...

    Jun 15, 2021

  • Script » Humor, Narrative
    Re: Man Vs. Mirror

    Good grammar overall, that style is very hard to write in. It's a good style for a "play script" and the dilemma was quite interesting. At the very end, I ...

    Jun 15, 2021


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