Arcaus

I'm going to write somthing good, even if it kills me. And if you don't like it then fine, i'll leave. Then you won't have to deal with my inferior ...

I've given up trying to explain what I write, or defend it. Poetry is allowed to be anything it wants, thats why its poetry. Every time I post anything it ...

I understand the reveiw...but unfortunately this is a mickey take, a hoo-haa, a sack of silly and i did not really expect a reveiw, but i like it anyway. Dog ...

For the love of god, LOOK AT THIS and tell me if you get any hint towards firearms! When i shoot somebody, i make sure you bloody know about it! ...

Well sometimes a little explanation goes a long way...forgive me for clarifying something, god forbid i might have benefited someone! :o

Well there's nothing there that describes a weapon of any kind...surely you must recognise it as a metaphor for her despair, but whatever...and plus i think it would be a ...

What?! Hendrix did'nt shoot Anna??!?!

*sigh* i really thought you'd like that one, i guess not, i'm sorry that it says "he did this" quite a lot and i thought he was quite a lonesome ...

CHAPTER TWO IS POSTED IN THE SCI-FI SECTION NOW

[quote="Haruno Sakura I'm still overly curious about this story, so I keep checking back to see your replies... You like it...(Victory Arm Pump) i will keep writing it now, just ...

Oh and by the way the reason Andala's speech is in itatlics is beacuse is voice is quite alien and i thought it would be good to seperate him from ...

Thanks Sakura and mars I was looking back on my previous post and i admit it was a little sharp, i understand you were trying to help, i was just ...

Well here goes.......*GASP*..... Firstly i used the word tendrils because i am trying to personify, yeah it's allowed, and streams implies a ridiculous amount of sweat which is just stupid. ...

Okay everyone sorry this is my YWS aproved version of my first few pages The tiny, metal box positively reeked of fear; you could smell it a mile off. And ...

Well i just assumed that a review had to contain some sort of positive spin on it at some point or another...you know, to stop the writer from thinking his ...