Arcaus

*sigh* i really thought you'd like that one, i guess not, i'm sorry that it says "he did this" quite a lot and i thought he was quite a lonesome ...

Heya I have to say that i think that you should go a little further with the whole animal hybrid thing, maybe you could have the animalistic features and behavoir ...

Heya I just wanted to suggest somthing about your work, i have no problems with the way you wrote it i just think that you had some good moments to ...

CHAPTER TWO IS POSTED IN THE SCI-FI SECTION NOW

Here is the next part of my Sci-Fi novel and i have decided to name it "Wasteland" please see my previous chapter for the beginning, but to be fair i'm ...

[quote="Haruno Sakura I'm still overly curious about this story, so I keep checking back to see your replies... You like it...(Victory Arm Pump) i will keep writing it now, just ...

Oh and by the way the reason Andala's speech is in itatlics is beacuse is voice is quite alien and i thought it would be good to seperate him from ...

Thanks Sakura and mars I was looking back on my previous post and i admit it was a little sharp, i understand you were trying to help, i was just ...

Well here goes.......*GASP*..... Firstly i used the word tendrils because i am trying to personify, yeah it's allowed, and streams implies a ridiculous amount of sweat which is just stupid. ...

Okay everyone sorry this is my YWS aproved version of my first few pages The tiny, metal box positively reeked of fear; you could smell it a mile off. And ...

Well i just assumed that a review had to contain some sort of positive spin on it at some point or another...you know, to stop the writer from thinking his ...

nice to see you all allow for rookie mistakes :smt108 and also its great to see you read it before you unloaded the negative points......uh-oh no you didn't :smt017

I read the previuos reveiw and am a little shocked, perhaps they are being too harsh, for one the part where Emma acepts to go on the date, you say ...

I thought it was wonderful, the useage of tiny and seemingly random details like emma's viola and the name of the robot make it warmer than your average science-fiction, i ...

I'm Arcaus, no prefferences on nicknames and such other things, i like books, i like writing, i'll try not to annoy you if possible.