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Can't wait!

Awesome! Now I have two parents! I feel so loved. :) It would be great if you reviewed the previous chapters (even if the review is only a few sentences ...

Don't worry 'bout it! You can finish your novel if you set your mind to it! And I will try to work on that flow problem as I start the ...

Did you blow through it all tonight?! Crazy! And awesome! Thank you! Did you see anything in the overall story I could work on?

Oh! That makes more sense!

Oops! Thanks for your help! You always see things I seem to miss. (which is good.) :)

That was fast! Thank you so much! Short is fine, don't worry bout it.

Well I'm writing Ch. 30something. Once get this chapter finished and the epilogue, it will be done!

:) I am so happy you reviewed these so quickly! It gives me motivation to write more today! (I'm trying to finish it before school starts August 11. We'll see ...

I write super slow actually. I started this about a year and a half ago. I was writing about this chapter when I joined YWS. I'm still writing but my ...

I do understand that is not always the case with prayers. But I want to show that God DOES answer with "yes"! Sometimes I feel like everybody is so ready ...

I have researched a lot for this book, but I know that there are definitely things I could learn more about! Sometimes I have a slight tendency to change the ...

I had a little thing in the gap but when I copied this from Word, it disappeared. Thank you for the review!!!!!!!!! I am so happy that you are sticking ...

Oni is a slave, but Asenath has known her for so long they are more like sisters. And I had a little thing in the gap but when I copied ...

I forgot to ask...What is a noob?