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Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 26
Wolfie!!! I was afraid you might not make it today. Thank you for your suggestions, especially the "brown" synonyms! I will try to use those in this chapter and in ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 28
Thanks for the review! You have been cranking it out today!
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 2
You are right. That was a little fast paced. I will try to do something about that as I go into editing soon. Thank you for your review and encouraging ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 27
Thank you for the review! I used the word "braverer' on purpose. Kids say the funniest things sometimes. Your critiques were very helpful!
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 26
Ah! I see what you mean! When I read it to my sister, she was always like "This is horrible!" Then I would feel bad. But she would explain that ...
Aug 29, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 24
I like how you re-worded that! I will look expectantly towards review day! :)
Aug 29, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 26
This is part 2/3 of the whole book. This is indeed a separate chapter. Yes, that is the real name of the wife of Senusret 2. Also there was a ...
Aug 27, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 23
Woo hoo! I love your reviews!!!! They are so helpful, but they area lso so encouraging. The word choice for Reziya was intentional. I was trying to help the reader ...
Aug 24, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 25
I don't know what to say except...thank you again for your reviews!!!
Aug 22, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 25
Thank you for your review! It's good to get a new perspective on my book/this chapter. Oh, and thanks for finding those problems for me!
Aug 20, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 24
Yeah, I guess it was sort of romance. I just don't think of it at a romance book. Thanks for your review! My notifications are being dumb so I just ...
Aug 20, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 23
Yes, I researched their mourning attire. From all the research I did, ancient Egyptians did not wear black because it was too hot. The horse thing I have struggled with. ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 22
Reziya was introduced in the chapter where her father died. Quibilah is her mother, not the high priest. I'm confused on what you are asking. Thank you for your consistent ...
Aug 17, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 1
Thank you for your review! I really don't mind the length. The more people review, the easier it will be to edit. I think. And your review was very balanced ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 22
Thank you for your amazing reviews! I think that you have really advanced as a reviewer since you first adopted my book!
Aug 16, 2014