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Don't worry; it wasn't too harsh. I totally understand what you are saying and agree that I can work on this chapter. I want their love to be beautiful and ...

In answer to your question about divorce, Moses came over 400 years after this. In Joseph's life, there was no Law exactly and no written history of Israel. It was ...

Yeah, it's probably not called a bathroom. I know they had like shower rooms, but I'm not really sure what they called it. I'll look into it! I mentioned before ...

Yay! I was hoping you would get to a review today! Thank you for rescuing this from the Green Room!

Chapter 33 is the last chapter...:)

Thanks :)

Um...what is this? Could you please delete it? @Iggy

Hmmm. I guess I never noticed how often she switches her mood, and I can understand why that could be annoying. Thanks for pointing it out!

Yeah, the "my son" thing does sound a little weird, but it's in the Bible that he calls him that. I think it's like a term of affection of an ...

Yeah, I had NO idea she did that until yesterday or the day before. I was telling her how excited I was that you are reviewing my book. And she ...

Thank you for all those who have faithfully read my entire book! You inspired me to keep writing when ideas seemed far away. Shout outs to: @PassionateReader @Wolfie36 @rp417 I ...

It's fine! I totally understand business with school and homework and sports and an instrument and LIFE...I'm not stressed at all. ;) I'm just glad you got to it! I'm ...

I do believe strongly in the importance of modesty, and I wanted to include it as a contrast to the really gross ways Egyptian women dressed. you think today is ...

I do use ellipses a bunch. It might be my addiction. Like some people are addicted to commas, I am hooked on ellipses. You will probably see that in the ...