Aravis10

I suppose Joseph did change a lot from the part with Asenath's mother. I imagined him just stressed because of the stakes, but I don't think I set up the ...

I have been reading book called "Structuring Your Novel" and I've been realizing that I need to work more on Asenath's character arch (and the story arch in general). So ...

Thanks for these reviews!!!!! I don't have any little brothers so I just tried to imagine them from kids that I help with at church. So...I will work on that! ...

Thank you! You have only a few chapters left! :)

That's ok! I need people to tell it to me straight more than people who will just flatter me (not that anybody on this site has done that)

Hmmmm...I noticed those paragraphs when I was posting some of those chapters. I will definitely try to work on it. Thanks for pointing those out!

The longer the review, the more points you get!

Thank you! Are you new to YWS? If you are, welcome! if you have any questions, I can try to answer them. :)

Wow. You asked a bunch of really good questions. I will definitely try to better answer them as I edit-hopefully. Thank you for the review! I was afraid that you ...

11 children! Wow, you have a bunch of siblings! I've seen some of them on here but I wasn't sure if they were your real siblings or um...YWS siblings (if ...

Wolfie, you are seriously the best person ever. I almost cried reading that; it was so beautiful. You made my day. :) :) I now feel like smiling the rest ...

He knows Hebrew! That is so cool! Sorry I doubted. I can look into that more.

I looked up the Hebrew on a Bible app so I'm hoping it's accurate. ??? It has no vowels! I'm not sure about that.... Those "typos" are actual the Hebrew ...

I'm so glad you liked it! I wanted to bring the Bible story to life by giving it emotions. I was really worried about this chapter would not do that. ...

Thank you so much!!! :)