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Re: Legend of King Arin: Rise of Darkness
Hi! It's Aravis; here to review! I am always up for a good medieval legend: princesses, dragons ogres, all that stuff. And I was not disappointed. Your story had a ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 5
Hi! It's Aravis. Again. :) Why do I even try to review these when they are so great? I love how you keep building on every character. They each have ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 4
Your story is as always, amazing! A few things seem to be falling into place, but there are still so many questions and not enough answers! Well, I guess that ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: Dancing In The Minefields- chapter three
Hi! It's Aravis; here to review! First, I love your main character. It is sometimes difficult to write about the big changes that happen when someone goes from a child ...
Nov 2, 2013 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 3
Hi! It's Aravis; here to give you a review, again. ;) There is the description of Lillian that I was looking for! Yay! I really enjoy the different perspectives of ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: The Quantum Mind: Chapter 2
Hi! It's Aravis, here to review! First, I have to say that you are an amazing writer! I loved your first chapter and this is even better! I like how ...
Nov 1, 2013 -
Re: Flowers
Hi! It's Aravis; here to review! This is my first review on this site so... here it goes! First, I like the laid back feel. It is somewhat like the ...
Nov 1, 2013