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Arashmaleki

  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Dreams

    your poem is really beautifull i really enjoyed the "Dust to dust" part, it gave it an oldies vibe, but just one thing about the "In something more than my ...

    May 17, 2015


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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