Aquareed

Hey! I thought this was really funny, but there were a few grammar nit picks I had: He brushed her ('the' would sound better here instead of 'her') curls from ...

Thank you so much for writing this beautiful piece and sharing your bear with us. You're very inspiring. I wish I could find something to critique about this piece, but ...

This is actually beautiful, I thought you captured the emotion in this perfectly. A couple nitpicks: "and that must be something, right? something— New?" I loved these lines - the ...

Ok, thanks for the review :)

Ok, thanks for the review. It's pronounced just like it's spelt.

Thanks for commenting, guys. Just to clarify, the MC is in fact a boy, but you're right, I hadn't given any inclination that he was.

Ok, thank you :)

Oops!

Lol, thanks.

Thanks! That was really helpful :pirate3:

Ok, I'm good!

Oh, wait - no one comment for a sec, have to edit something

Awesome! Don't have time to comment proparly now, but might edit later. Just want to say I loved it!

Ok. No one is commenting!!!!

Thanks. I don't really like this bit, so I might do more on it.