AquaMarine

Hey there! Moving onto this chapter ... This, for me, was one of my favourite chapters so far. You seem to have captured the emotions in this piece more, and ...

Hey there! Ok, so again you've got a load of good points here. I did pick out a couple of nitpicks, however. “he...had his will written in my prescience.” Presence? ...

Hey Coco! I'm so sorry that I didn't review all of these; I thought that I had but obviously not. :D Well, I'm pretty sure that everyone has got all ...

Hey there! Sorry this took so long, by the way! You've got a load of good reviews here, but I'll see if I can pick anything out! Nitpicks This time ...

Hey, Gal! Here to review. Nitpicks: storm...sleep. I think that using brackets in the middle of a line detracts from the flow of the poem as you're reading. Although I ...

Hey there! Here as requested. Sorry this is a little late, I've been kinda busy/stressed/NaNoing. I'll just go through some nitpicks. If the change is fairly self explanatory, then I'll ...

Hey Hawks! Here as requested. So, a story about Mantises, huh? Awesome! That already makes the story original, I don't think this is something I'll have read before! I was ...

Hi Sarah! This is just going to be a quick review before I go to bed. Ok, so I think that what you have here can be your base. Secrets: ...

Hey there! Here as requested! Nitpicks It’s 1916, The Battle of the Somme, I sit here in this shell-hole, The battle rages on. I have two small nitpicks with these ...

Hey there! Here as requested. I actually haven't read the poem that this is based on. :oops: But I'll still do my very best to review it for you! Nitpicks ...

Hey there Muff! Here as requested. Sorry if it's repeated or anything, I'm kind of busy so I don't want to read through the reviews. Nitpicks My friend, my dear ...

Hey there! Sorry that this wasn't done yesterday, by the way, but hey! Ok, so nitpicks first! Well, my first nitpick would basically be your first part with Reaper. The ...

Hey there! This is a very nice poem! It's quite simple and short, but the message that's in it is quite powerful and you can get the emotion through the ...

Wow! This is really cute. It made me laugh, but as well as that it's pretty good technically wise. Your rhymes fit and the rhythm flows well. Personally, I love ...

Hey there! Wow, so this is a pretty long poem! But it's kind of cute nonetheless. I'll just go through some nitpicks that I have. Earlier this morning I escaped; ...