AquaMarine

Hey there! Well, I don't think I've seen any of your poetry before but this was lovely. Really well done. I sometimes see parentheses used in poetry and it really ...

Hey there! Ok, so this poem seems to be suffering from the fact that it basically is prose with line breaks. This is such a great topic, such a great ...

Hmm, well obviously my first thought reading this were 'emo'. It feels a little self centred and a pretty typical suicide poem. You need to watch out for the typos. ...

Hey there! Well, this was a lovely poem. Very nice. It's one of those poems where there's actually some sort of unique style coming through which is cool. You seem ...

Hey there! Well, my first impression was that you were veering slightly on the way to angsty and self pitying here, but it's not a full blown emo poem so ...

Oh, I loved this poem! It was really nice. Like Matt, I'm not sure if the lines in italic are from the song or just part of the poem, but ...

Hey there! Now, while I do agree with Kammie that some of this poem is pretty angsty, I do like the way you've brought it back in the end by ...

Hey there! Ok, so I have a suggestion for you. Obviously here you've tried to integrate a rhyme scheme. Now, rhyme schemes can be pretty good BUT sometimes they don't ...

Here , Karsten. Because I don't like squishing your heart. :D

:D Haha! Maybe we should have a designated epilogues week. Or something.

feel free to ask me anything! Salt and vinegar or ketchup on chips? Is this smiley: :roll: cute or annoying? Would you prefer to live forever or die tomorrow? Is ...

Hey there! Ok, so this was a pretty nice poem, I'll just go through it a bit. Rhyming: Rhyme Scheme: I preferred the second stanza to the first because in ...

Ooh, I know exactly what you mean with that! My documents are littered with beginnings that would have made nice stories. But, alas, they will stay as beginnings. If I ...

:O Awesome!

Hey Trans! Awesome username, by the way. :D Eoin Colfer? I do love the Fowl series. :D I think I've read all of them ... And his Supernaturalists book. Is ...