AquaMarine

*reviews* This is madness!

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're having a nice time so far. :) This is a nice poem, it really is. However, I did think that sonnets were ...

Hey there! Agh. It's full of 'U's. Be sure to spell them out in full, k? And, as Empress said, I think punctuation would work here. Your rhymes seemed kind ...

Dude, now I really want candy. Well, I loved this! It's taken a poetic (and extremely scary) slant on the evil usergroup which I know and love.

Hey! As Kat said, if these are lyrics then you'll want to move them to the actual Lyric forum. But, I'll review them anyway, for now. It's kind of sweet, ...

Hey Jay! This is a hard subject to write about, I guess. It's controversial, but you've captured the emotions that I'm sure a lot of children would feel in the ...

Hey there! One thing that immediately stood out to me was that every single word is practically capitalised. It's distracting, not needed, and technically grammatically incorrect. ;) It's a nice ...

Hey there! I'm just going to reiterate what everyone's said, really, and just point out the lack of emotion you have going through this poem. You have the idea, and ...

Welcome to YWS! And yeah, age doesn't really matter. I myself am 14, and I'm not the youngest member here by far. How're you finding YWS so far? If you ...

Hey Alpha! This does seem like actual lyrics rather than lyric poetry, but I'll move on. To me, the poem overall felt a little generic, like it could have been ...

Hey there! I really liked this. It's an interesting subject choice, and you've made it all the more interesting with your poem. It's kind of quirky and cute, which I ...

Hey there! Ok, I'm really sorry but the spelling and grammar was horrible. First thing, you really want to write 'and' instead of '&'. But, I think people have mentioned ...

Hey there! I enjoyed the language you used. I find the language of that era really cool, so well done for that! One thing is that sometimes the language feels ...

Reviews are the comments that you write for peoples' work. Reviews are comments over 250 characters, by the way. So you've reviewed people when you've clicked reply on someone's work ...

I don't have any starts, but why don't you check out this website for some creative writing prompts! There are a lot of prompts there, so you can easily pick ...