AquaMarine

Hey Pink! I don't think I reviewed chapter five, but I'll just move onto this one ... Nitpicks: “For us, duh,” he replied rolling his eyes up . You don't ...

Hey Texan! It would be really great if you could review some of my photography. You only need to review the most recent photos, but it would be extremely helpful ...

Hey there! What I loved about this poem was your use of imagery and rhythm. It painted vivid pictures in my head, and you kept a wonderful beat throughout. However, ...

Hey Jenny Squirt Jenthura. :D I have to admit, I'm not usually such a big fan of prose-poetry. To me, it feels too much like prose (well, duh) which goes ...

Hey Kyll! This was nice, really nice. I think I've reviewed a couple of your poems recently, and really enjoyed them. You have a nice style. The rhyme scheme is, ...

Thanks, Fixed! And you don't like the laughing one? Darn. Maybe I only do because it's my sister ... :D

Oh, Eddie, I absolutely love this one. It feels, to me, more mature than some of your others (although that might just be the lack of ellipses! :D ) But ...

'Sup Jimmy Jam. Random question time? I think so ... Do you like scrabble? What's your favourite emoticon? Who do you aspire to be like? Want to drive a motorcycle ...

Good for you, Nate! :D

Wow, long time since I posted here! So, I've got some new photos here. But what I also want to ask you guys is if you could possibly take a ...

Hey Dreams! Sorry this is a little late. Mistake: It was in there their nature, their very blood. Overall: So, this seems like a neat idea. It seems like a ...

Hey Coco! I'm so sorry about what a terrible reviewer I've been. I've totally slacked off for, ahem, a week. Although I blame the Minions for that, as I'm having ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! It's cool that you came back here now, YWS just draws people in, doesn't it? :D I'll review your poem when it's up, if you ...

Hey there! This was kind of scary, actually, so well done for that. However, I thought it would be quite nice if you evoked more images sometimes throughout your writing. ...

Hey there! I really liked this. As Van said, you've got all the important points down to pat which is a lovely thing to see. This reminded me somewhat of ...