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Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
Guys, I'm going to pull out of this one. Sorry! ~Amy
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Happy Birthday, WD
Happy Birthday! :D
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
Sam. Can clone himself. "California? Great." Sam snorted, cloning himself almost as instinct. If people were going to try and find him, then he was going to do his damn ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Benji's Reviewing Mania (Exam Period!)
Hey Ben! Would you mind reviewing my poem: Ugly Melodies/Silent Songs ? It's feeling a little lonely at the moment. Three sentences about it? 1) The rhyme kind of sucks, ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Letter from a possesive vampire
Haha, I loved this in a strange way. It made me giggle. Obviously there is the difference between your and you're, but that's been mentioned. I was also going to ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Tremors (For Haiti) - Edit
I love this, Kammie. You've captured the emotion really well here, and it's beautiful, despite the subject. I would agree with Splodey in some cases; although the longer words do ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: As roses burned.
Hey Eddie! I loved this poem, but then again, I love all your poems. I'm still amazed at how many you're managing to write considering the amount of reviewing you ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
Sam. Can clone himself. Freak the crowd out , Sam thought. That wasn't really what he wanted to do. He didn't want to be the one that everyone was staring ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
All done! *flops*
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Reg Carter: Deep Cover Chapt. 3 (16+)
Hey Ben! I like this chapter. One thing I'm starting to really enjoy here is your dialogue, that's where your talent kind of shines through. The dialogue generally gives me ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Reg Carter: Deep Cover Chapt. 2 (16+)
Hey Ben! Here (at last) to review! I don't really have any nitpicks to point out. I've read the first chapter, and I enjoyed it a lot! What I would ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Daring Frankie. Chapter one: Demons
Hey there! Here as requested. Ok, I'll go through some nitpicks first... "I love you mom," says a eager young Carrie crawling into her bedsheets. Eager? She's going to bed. ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: I dont get this...
Oh, pfft. I've only been here for seven months, and I've worked out the best way to get friends. It's the ol' carrot and stick technique. I bribe them with ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Tesla's Earthquake Machine
Name: Oscar Nesbit Age: 24 Appearance: Like this but with dark hair. He's tall, around 6'1, and pretty slim. Personality: To his colleagues, Oscar is an extremely clever and sarcastic ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Fate (An Interpretation into English)
Hey Kyl! I'm listening to the song now, and it really is beautiful. I've never attempted to translate lyrics myself (not that I have a need to) but it's always ...
Jan 22, 2010
