AquaMarine

Hey Pudin! Sorry this is a little late ... So, I think that what I wanted to say was pretty much said by everyone else! It's a very sweet poem, ...

Hey Snake! How are you today? Elinor's already given you some fine tips, so I'll just give you a welcome and offer any help that you might need. I'm just ...

Hey there! You have an interesting poem here. Obviously an interesting topic, and some great questions to ask. However, I do have a suggestion for you. Thing is, your poem ...

The Barney Mango song. I love mangoes, mangoes love me, that's the way it's gonna be, I'll rip of their skin and feast on their insides, because mangoes taste really ...

:D Awesome!

To review someone's work, you just click on the 'reply' button at the bottom of their piece of work. Then, just say whatever you want to about their work! But, ...

Hey Howler! I love this idea. Sometimes it can be a challenge to write about love, but you seem to have done pretty well with this! Much like Dems, my ...

Hey there! I loved this, I really did. It's an original poem which has beautiful imagery, how could I not? However, you do need to watch out for this: The ...

Done! :D

Hey there! I wasn't such a fan of this story. Fantasy is always a great route to go down, but you need to watch out for pitfalls on the way. ...

Ack. I've been hiking all day and surviving on energy drinks. But it's still only 4:30! I want to get up to ... 300 reviews today. So that only means ...

Hey Elinor! Sorry this is a little late. My problem here is the way that you've rushed this, really. I can't get my head around it properly, because you've thrown ...

OH. MY. GOD. *pounces*

Hey Coco! Firstly, I just want to say that I don't think you should give up on this. In a way, you're only just starting the main plot here. And ...

Yay, Ben! :wink: My day involved Pizza, Mario Kart and Indiana Jones so I'm fairly satisfied. :D