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Re: Newsletters...
One thing I'd love to read would be articles by different members of YWS; that would be really cool. Obviously some writing tips would be great, perhaps alternating between poetry ...
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: Friends or Followers?
Ah, this seems like a really good idea. Although, when we're sending a PM will we still get the option to quickly add someone who belongs to our friend (or ...
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: Friends or Followers?
Ah, this seems like a really good idea. Although, when we're sending a PM will we still get the option to quickly add someone who belongs to our friend (or ...
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: The First Quarter Quell
Yeah, there are two spots left, I think. :)
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
All done!
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Astianna: Chapter Two
Hey there, here as requested! I can't really find too much wrong with this, actually. I like the idea you have here, and you've created a really engaging chapter. One ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Untitled (Scene one)
Hey there, here as requested! On first thoughts, I'm afraid I have to agree with the reviewers above. The driving point of a script should really be the dialogue, whereas ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: R.I.P.
One of my characters was once beheaded by some wet, barbecue-soaked cheese, but this was in a romantic comedy. Ah, yes. Nothing says 'rom-com' like a piece of wet, barbecued ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: The Eyes of a Child
Hey there! This is an interesting piece, really. It's original, and you have a nice style of writing. However, I still find myself slightly iffy about it. You do have ...
Feb 21, 2010 -
Re: what's your song?
Haha, this seems cool. Me please! :)
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Done both! :D
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: The Janitors - Chapter 1 (Final Edit)
Hey Hero, here as requested. Ok, so I think that this needs a lot of work. I'll go through a couple of points with you. One problem I really had ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Resting
Hey Rosey! I actually really like this. The way you've written it flows in a way that seems to incorporate the idea of rest by flowing sort of slowly. So ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Howdy.
Hey there! Welcome to YWS! Well ... we don't know much about you yet! Why not tell us about yourself! What do you like to read/write? Do you prefer rain ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: The colours! They are gone!
It is a little weird, really. But I'm so excited for the badges! :)
Feb 19, 2010
