AquaMarine

Hello there, welcome to YWS! Firstly, I think the premise of this story is nice and cute. Obviously you have a nice idea, and it just needs some more work ...

Hi! The boarding school I go to is for 16-21 year olds, so I'm not sure how useful some of the information will be to you. Feel free to pick ...

Ho Chloe, welcome aboard. :pirate3: YWS is indeed an amazing community, and I'm happy you like to sound of it. The site can be a little confusing though, and therefore ...

Hi! This is a difficult choice ... partly because all of the options have their fallbacks in a way, but also because each one of them would actually work. The ...

Post something, I shall review it. (Unless you post a fanfiction piece that I know nothing about, in which case check with me first). Please only post 1 or 2 ...

Hi Amy, I'm Amy! Welcome to YWS, obviously, I'm sure you'll enjoy it here. Looks like you already have a lot of writing experience, so I can't wait to see ...

Hello there, welcome to YWS. :) Firstly, just some nitpicks. I've tried to kill my own family - which was a failure where my father and brother were concerned - ...

“Home is not where you live, but where they understand you” - -Christian Morgenstern It's been a while, but thank you for being one of my favourite homes.

Hey Rachael, This review will probably crash and burn, but I'll see how it goes. Firstly, the poem is quite messy, which I'm sure you might realise. In parts, it's ...

If someone deserves a badge, they will get the badge. If you feel like you aren't being nominated when you should be, then the chances are it's simply because people ...

Hello there! Right now, the biggest way I can see you improving this poem is by making it (and I'm really sorry for the generalisation here) more poetic. It's quite ...

Hello there! What I felt most with this piece is that it seems to be very disconnected. You have a nice premise for it, with the numbers, but I feel ...

Found a prompt on a site a while ago and wrote this out quickly. I like where I went with it. If you'd like a (very) brief explanation of my ...

Hey there! On the subject of the year '1983', is there actually a significance to it? For me, it just felt like you chose the date and you wanted it ...

Hey! You asked whether if, having not seen the title, I as a reader would have known what the story was about. I think I could have taken a pretty ...