AquaMarine

Hi there! Well, this is a rather beautiful poem. I usually enjoy poems about seemingly small and insignificant things that nonetheless are rather amazing. You write with an eloquence and ...

Hello there! Here as requested. :D Okay, so I'm not going to go into any nitpicks - I'll just give you my general thoughts. The first paragraph, I found, didn't ...

Hello! As a poem, I think this needs a little bit of work. For me, the rhyme scheme halts it a little bit - the words become a little too ...

Hello! I actually really like this poem. The way you wrote it, which was in quite a wordy way, made me think of a very charming voice telling a story, ...

Hello, Coco! Nice to see you around again. So, you asked me to take a look a the edited version - I'll see what I can do! The Elders of ...

Lol , the day before my science exams. Pfft. Who needs Chemistry? (I jest, I jest. Atoms are awesome.)

Edit: So yeah, just play around with Ty if you need/want too. Just no butt stuff. *cackles* EDIT: 'I'm leaving for a while ... LOL JK, I have no life.'

Hello there! I don’t want life to be easy I want the chaos and the rain I want the insanity even if it brings pain Something was pointed out in ...

Ah, okay. I'm talking to El now, anyway. And was Reet's new profile okay? I changed it a little.

Awesome, Ben. Anything you want me to do? Also, out of curiosity, what are you doing with the approval process? Because on the previous page Mizzle said previous members didn't ...

Woo, more writing from Jenny! You are brought from your deep slumber ing by the noise of your alarm clock. You grasp at your beautiful dreams, already fading, but catch ...

For lurvin' McFly. :wink:

First and Last Name: Jackson Reet Nickname: Reet Age: 28 Appearance (Description): 5'8. A bit on the thin side, and pale. Not extremely muscular, but quite fit. Brown, hair which ...

(( xDD Knightley, I have to say, Reet is supposed to be the smart guy on the team. I doubt he would suggest wrapping a body in bubble-wrap and putting ...

Hi! Yes, what really drew me to this photo was the colour of the rose. It is extremely vibrant and beautiful, which makes the photograph interesting. However, there are a ...