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Re: But Home Wouldn't Be The Same...
Hi, Ish. :D Well, wow. This is brilliant. Your use of the senses is captivating, and you managed to create a truly entertaining poem that's extremely enjoyable, talented and evoking. ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Inquiries for my Fellow Men
Hello! I. I liked your opening. There seems to be a very clear sense of detachment within it - which I like because it seems to tie in with your ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Hannah's Heartbreak
Hello, welcome to YWS. :) I like your reason for writing the song. XD The first thing I noticed here were the ellipses. I'm assuming (apologies if the assumption is ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Ali's Hot Dogs *Edited*
Hi, El! Ah, interesting. It's always nice to see what people do with these contest entries, especially when they aren't created to be funny. Anyway, thoughts. One of the first ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: A Veil of Clouds
Hello! Grammar: I'm not going to do nitpicks, but in your poem the grammar is quite off-putting and, for me, really detriments the flow and overall feel. As some people ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Review Day November 2010 Check-In
It is 8:50 am. I begin now. I'm hoping for ten reviews, but with a busy day that may not happen.
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Help?
Age: 15 Nationality: British Did you read all/some/none of the Harry Potter books? All. Did you watch all/some/none of the Harry Potter movies? All. How into the Harry Potter world ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: Reviewing Sunday on November 28th (GMT)
Awesome, I can actually do this one. I'm going to go for 10 reviews so I can get to 400.
Nov 23, 2010 - Re: Shaking off dew-drops Nov 21, 2010
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Re: Young Writers Literary Journal 2011
Rest assured, you'll be receiving either a sci-fi or a fantasy short story submission from me. ^^ I just have to decide what to enter... When you say we have ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: RIP Harry Potter [Spoilers]
Hmm. 1. It doesn't feel like Harry Potter anymore, there are no robes, no wizard-isms (or very few), and almost no use of magic except for the odd stupify. Not ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: The Circle of Life
Hello, Toe. Here as requested. Firstly, I'll just go through your poem. Unexpected lies glide into our lives, I would really like it if you perhaps explained this line further. ...
Nov 20, 2010 -
Re: An Immigrant's Tale
Hello! Sorry this is a little later than I intended. she added them to the pot resting on it's hook over the large stone fireplace It's should be 'its'. Her ...
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Plagiarism and Copyright Infringement
What if you have an account somewhere else, like DA, and you put the same pic up on both? How can you tell if that's the case? Some people have ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
If you go to My YWS > My Profile Settings, you'll see three spaces for Featured Topics on your profile. Here, you need to put in the Topic ID of ...
Nov 14, 2010