AquaMarine

Do they have to ruin everything now!!! I have been dreading this day ever since LOTR . . . :(

Thanks guys! I totally agree about the cliched ending. It was my first idea for the last stanza and when i read it over i thought exactly the same thing. ...

I love these books! i am so annoyed cause i haven't got round to reading inkdeath yet, is it as good as the other two? but i thought the movie ...

Thanks for the reviews! i was reading over it, i can't believe how much punctuation i left out. Oh well, hopefully i'll do better next time. Thank you for the ...

Hey! i'm kind of new too, i have been on here for a few days and i already love it! i write poetry too, so far i've submitted about 3 ...

There wasn't really anything in here that stood out to me and made it a really good poem, it seemed a bit cobbled together and not thought through completely. Now ...

I was totally like other people, i thought this was going to be a deep, depressing poem about suicide or something! but no! It was . . . original. Did ...

You are quite intriguing, a mystery And when I think I want to see That secret which you posses I shy away, afraid of what will surface If I should ...

The sunset drips over the hill, A blaze of red, orange and pink, Silhouetting the trees. A bird flies in the distance, Trying, trying to get home, But it is ...

i thought this was a really good drawing, it captures the feeling of a moment well, although yes it is kinda romantic. The proportions do seem slightly off however, especially ...

I really loved this poem, and i totally agree with what everyone else has said. The idea of the presenting spring as a little girl is in itself a good ...

really, really loved this! you can tell that it's all true feelings that you have written down and that just makes it better overall. it's also great when it's someting ...

i liked the idea of the poem - if i've got it right. but i did think that it got lost in throughout. i agree with cross in that the ...

there you go:)

i really, really liked this poem. splattered together, mixed together. i though that line was really well done with the repetition. i love the way it flows throughout, it's one ...