AquaMarine

The Bartimaeus Trilogy - Jonathan Stroud Addition - Toni Jordan Past Mortem and High Society - Ben Elton The Black Magician Trilogy - Trudi Canavan The Harry Potters - J.K ...

Wow, i really, really liked this. It's one of those ideas that if written wrongly could turn into a cliched, boring poem. But i think you did it well, it ...

i love the idea of time as a vulture, great imagery! As you said in your description the poem is deep and meaningful. Although it was short, it said what ...

I'm not quite sure what this poem is about, i mean i understand what's happening but i dont know why and i don't know any of the feelings behind it. ...

Hey there! Ok, so, i really love this! It's cute, it flows fine, it rhymes (yay!) and it's not too cliched. I would think about splitting it into stanzas, but ...

this feels very bland to me. the rhymes are a bit basic - Friends - Ends, there - where. they didn't work for me. "Is very rare" (2nd stanza) would ...

Ok so I'm making a film at the moment and I need a poem to go over the pictures and video I have. None of mine seemed right so I ...

Hi! Here goes . . . My best friend forever in my heart A bit of a cliched idea for me. but if you like it, keep it. will never ...

OK then, Right now I want to die. As Shina said, very cliched. not a great opening, it makes the poem just seem like any other. I believe I've said ...

i've read some twilight spoofs on here and most of them just switch the story round completely, but this felt a little bit more subtle, i loved it! made me ...

It's thanks in Telugu. in my attempt to become multicultural i'm learning thank you in as many different languages as possible and then writing them after reviews - then i ...

ehhh did anything else happen ? and who was with you ? and other spefic details would be nice.. don't know if this sounds stupid but it wasn't actually about ...

ah but then the whole focus of the poem would be the beach, and it's about the waves right? keep it as it is, it's good! Aqua X

Ok, wow, that was amazing. I usually just review poems but i am definatly coming back here if that is the standard! Totally unique outlook, i loved it so much! ...

ah fair point . . . but i think the title told me :) Aqua X