AquaMarine

Indie (By the way, I know I've switched to 1st person speaking, I find it easier!) (I thought Thisbe could be in the van. So she's in there. Is that ...

I watched amazed as Sora flew away. I was free! I could go somewhere, anywhere! But then I heard Whiteside's manic screams "SORA, SORA! GET THE WOLF! COME BACK AND ...

Is it dead already ?!

Hold them off, hold them off. I chanted, baring my teeth at Sora and Arun. My head throbbed and I could feel the hot wetness of blood trickling past my ...

Masumi had opened my door! I was free! I had run out after him, my wolf body running fast, slipping through the closing door and out onto the corridor. I ...

Lupa, wolf The giggling got on my nerves. I could deal with the other noise, it was easy to tune out, but the giggling was horrible and high pitched, like ...

xD 9/10

Banned for having an awesome birthstone!

Ok, I know I'm posting again, but pfff, no-one else seems to be! Izzy She watched the group of people whispering together, most of them looking wary and just a ...

Should we start soon? Or do people have to post their profiles?

If you looked into my eyes, you wouldn't see all the dead butterflies. This line is too long. Just take out "the" and it will be better. Although not perfect. ...

Transylvania! Awesome! 9/10 (Mr Knightly - yeah England!) :D

Banned for having a best friend who's favourite song is Paramore!

Wow, this was very well written. Sad, very different but compelling. I found myself mouthing the words on my third read! The last two lines are beautiful, very simple and ...

Love me perfect , Just show me you can try , Doesn’t have to be forever , Just before I die . Ok, I've put some simple punctuation in here, ...