AquaMarine

You've read more books than me? You've read more books than me?! You've read more books than me?! *Stages a read-off* xD Aqua X

No worries, I got it ... (by the way, Sadie doesn't know Tanya is a fairy, they are quite new friends) Sadie I saw a familiar figure sitting on a ...

^^ I am supposed to be her friend in the mortal, but I have no idea where she is, if she's in the mortal or lost world, and where she ...

Ok: Jay and Derrick found Lupa, she is unconcious now and Keiran is with them, he came to find help for Masumi. But now Masumi is being helped by Conrad, ...

Syte, sorry to point this out but the story is supposed to be terrible. That's the point! It was very bad by the way, xD. Which in this case is ...

Socialising with who? We're all in school ? xD 7/10

Same, feels like it's about 3 people in the story! :D

Hey there! I'm Aqua *waves*. So, you've got the rules, here's a little bit about the colours in the names... Greeters are blue. They, well, greet newbies! They'll help you ...

Uh, this is confusing to read, as you have posted it twice? At first I thought it was just very long, but you need to change that. Rightio, down to ...

I laughed at Jaidev's comment. Whitehead had been sneaky, hiding a tiger can't have been easy. I began to feel woozy, my vision blurred and began to black out. I ...

I was going to give you some nitpicks, but Shina's said what I wanted to say there! If you just change the rhyming and syllables a little bit, this could ...

I ran up the road, my feet pounding down on the tarmac, my arms pumping and my Ipod blaring Green Day loudly. I ran everyday for half an hour around ...

6/10 not doing much for me

10/10 Is that the Killers? :D

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