AquaMarine

Hey there! Sorry I'm late saying this, but welcome to YWS! It is an awesome site and I'm pretty sure you'll fit right in! An English teacher, huh? I've always ...

Sadie "Course I'm not mad!" She smiled and punched Sharonda's shoulder playfully. "Just ... please don't do it again? I kind of like being in control of myself." Sharonda smiled, ...

Hey there! Thought I'd come and review you poem. Ok, so frist off I really like this piece. Really liked it. The punctuation however, I did not like. But everyone ...

Rachel - Survivor I crouched low on the building top, watching the boy thump at the gate; watching the zombies getting ever closer to where he was standing. I heard ...

Name: Rachel "Rae" Watson Age: 18 Weapons: Two daggers and a rusty handgun. Appearance: Insane?: Nope. Just lonely History: She came from an average life, her family were all nice ...

Amy grinned at Hope, I love it! One of my favourites is "Before The Lobotomy" , how 'bout you?" She patted the chair next to her, "come and sit down, ...

And in the middle of that war, romance develops So, we all fall in love?

I'm thinking a female vampire, ain't none of those yet. And maybe a male human. *Saves spot*

She winked. "Um... ok. My favourite song at the moment is Romeo and Juliet by the Killers. And Good Riddance by Green Day. And Blink by Chameleon Circuit. And ... ...

Amy sat very, very still for a second. "My favourite song? Now, if you guys are going to ask horrible questions like that I'm going to move myself right back ...

Java I laughed, the park? Well, why not. "Sure," I replied "let's go." I handed one of the popcorns to Cara and we set off, weaving our way through the ...

**Urm, I'm same as Gspp. I had a try at third person but it's not my thing.** Java Wow. Cara looked...different. But then again, I was only used to seeing ...

I'm a little worried about that too. I have my first GCSE exam in November (it's biology as well. Fail!) but I still really want to try this out. If ...

Mine's the same as Jet's, sorry I didn't mention that before.

Hey there! Ok, I'm not very familiar with the whole structure and rules of sonnets so I'm just going to say a couple of things that stood out to me. ...