AquaMarine

Hey there! Here as requested. Firstly, I see absolutely no puncuation in this piece! None at all. If this was read out loud then youd lose a lot of the ...

I call dibs on a girl who can control the weather :)

What about The Monster Raving Loony Party? I've always liked them ...

I would like to join but I'm a little confused as to what's going to happen ...

Rena "Superior race, I guess" she said loftily. "Mikaela, you?" "Rena." I replied shortly and went back to nursing my drink. I wasn't really in the mood for talking to ...

Hey there! Firstly, I have to say that I agree with WD about the whole switching POV thing. It is quite confusing for the reader when they aren't fully connected ...

Hey there! Here as requested! Ok, so I didn't review your prologue because I think that everyone who's commented it has pretty much sorted you out. You do have some ...

Well, if people want to join then they could be people already on the island?

Why don't you play it? Then we can start xD

Uhuh, sure is! You got any ideas for Java and Cara at the moment? I wont be able to do it *right* now. I'm attempting to do this review in ...

*bursts out of the crate with a huge cauliflower on her head* Mwa ha ha! *runs at Irish*

Ok, Java will find out somehow (we'll thrash out the details) and we'll see what happens after that. To be honest, I think Java really likes Cara so will probably ...

I don't mind if Java finds out his identity, but if Java does then he will probably tell Cara. Unless Marrow finds a way to stop him doing that ...

*jumps into the food crate and hides from flung tomato.*

*builds a grape catapult and flings rotten, mushy grapes at everyone*