AquaMarine

Nitpick me, bud! :D Thanks ~Amy

Hey there! Sorry it took me so long to get to this - you caught me at a busy time! Alrighty then, nitpicks! I closed my eyes , hoping that ...

Allyson, First Mate, Bodlina Vincent was already dragging the girl to where the captain was waiting, Brightie was trailing behind him. It was a shame really, if Brightie had left ...

Thank you, guys :D

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This is pretty much the first short story I've ever written. But tear it apart, please! It's for thechocolatewritingcat's competition using creative writing prompt 302. Write from the PoV of ...

You get 9/10 just for the Killers song. One of mah favourites :D 1) Roll over DJ - JET 2) We Danced Together - The Rakes 3) A Message From ...

*wakes up from melon induced slumber, looks around sleepily and flops back onto the floor. "No. More. Food."*

Hey there, Nick! Welcome to YWS! It's lovely to meet you. Firstly, I'll just give you a heads up on some of the rules! 1) Plz no cht spk OR ...

(( My opinion will pwn your supercomputer. Don't blame me if it combusts ... :D ))

((Fair doos. Just saying xD ))

Why, you going to get me cake for my birthday?

(( Yeah, skipping to the meeting would be good. And maybe people weren't posting too much because their characters didn't have too much to do on the weekend. Perhaps if ...

(( Yo be honest, I'm still extremely lost. But I'll give it a shot! xD )) (( Oh, and another idea - would anyone like to have a "forbidden love" ...

**Ok, so I'm first mate (second in command) on the Bodlina and I am totally lost. Where are we?**