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Hey Ben! They grow and thrive Upon the ideologies of life’s Naïve and unexplainable existence This stanza seems a little bit hollow - like you're trying to dress it up ...

THIS IS TOTALLY NOT LATE OR ANYTHING. Life: Full of truths, Lies and swindles; Good times and bad. A memory built upon the diet of priceless and countless emotions. Reluctance ...

This is one of the first Review Days that I genuinely have nothing to do on (apart from, you know, revision and homework and general household chores ...) so I ...

I just submitted a photo, and it worked fine. Is yours a very large file size? If you save it in Photoshop or another editing program you can choose to ...

I'll finish everything up tomorrow! Had an inordinate amount of art work due today, and it turns out I'd done about half of it. :wink:

In The Mediator series, by Meg Cabot, Suze's brothers swear a lot. For example,in book three, Jake says, " What a freakin' jerk." Then Suze thinks " ...Only he didn't ...

A poetry review, please? :) I'm struggling with the ending slightly, so any thoughts on that would be great. Obviously anything you can say about it is wonderful and useful. ...

I'm not sure about the ending of this in particular, but help with any of it is really appreciated. -- Our barbed tongues worried away at old grudges, dug into ...

Perse, I've finished yours, sorry I couldn't be more helpful! One of yours is done, Benji, but I'll get to the others soon.

Hey there! In the first few lines of the poem, I felt like you were being a bit too generous with your words - I'm not going to point out ...

Benji! And so begins my trawl of your poetry ... The hay of a million wordless experiences Presents itself to your fingertips, As you gradually unpick your way. For me, ...

Hey there! I love Doctor Who. So much. I think you'll find a lot of fellow Whovians here. I got one of those remote control Daleks for Christmas, which provides ...

I'm sorry you feel that way - it's a real shame. :) If it helps, I can address some of your points. A lot of members of YWS do simply ...

Hi, Lily! Firstly, as previous people have mentioned, you need to improve your basic spelling in this piece! That's not a big issue, because as always this is a draft ...

Hello there. I'm pretty happy to review anything you throw at me, but just in case you're worried here's a break-down. I'll give you a cookie for this: General Fiction ...