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Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Done Anima's and Young's! Poem, you deleted the link from your post, so do you still want me to review it? I'll have a go at yours tomorrow Fruit (sorry, ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Draft help: Prologue to the fantasy ver 2
Hey there! Here as requested. Ok, so firstly I'm going to go over nitpicks in this. Although when I read through there were very few - you've eliminated most of ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Sounds of the Santoor (A Tale of Hundred strings)
Hey there! Here to review as requested. Nitpicks: Soothing melody of the autumn springs, I think it might be better if you say "The soothing melody of Autumn springs." Just ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Silence speaks.
*bounces in* 'Ello, Ed. Glad that you did repost this :D. Hummm. Don't be paranoid about us dear, we won't kill you in your sleep. *cackles* And yeah, I know ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Hey! Look! It's a Kamas!
*touches Ipod* :twisted:
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Hello
Well hello there Maddy and welcome to YWS! *hands cookie* So, you're a nerd huh? Me too! *high fives*. With that in mind, I'm pretty sure that we'll get along! ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: The YWS Adventure
((Fiiine JDizzle. I'll bring you in. Uhmmm, ok. Got it :D )) AquaMarine Aqua patted Tex's head and hopped off her stomach, swallowing the last of her sandwich noisily. She ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: The Darker Side of The Street
((Well, I'm going to start because otherwise I might actually have to write some of my NaNo :D )) Sam Scott - Shifter (Retriever) Sam grinned as he slung his ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: The YWS Adventure
AquaMarine Aqua pulled a face at Mo through the window and sighed. The book hadn't really filled her up, and her tummy was starting to make some really strange, hungry ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: The Darker Side of The Street
By the way, you do realise that the band now has three guitarists? My character, Pudin's character and Nutty's second character? Or am I just having a stupid day today? ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: House of Night
Ezra Ezra laughed and a little bit of the awkwardness between him and Asher vanished, some of the ice thawed. He grinned at Asher again and plopped himself down on ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: The Darker Side of The Street
I'm sorry, Irish :(. And yeah, Muff, that'll be cool :D
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: The YWS Adventure
AquaMarine Aqua rolled her eyes at Summer and proceeded over to the window that Mo was standing at. She pressed her face against the window and began to breathe onto ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: The Darker Side of The Street
Seeing as there is a 5:1 ratio of guys:girls I think I'm gonna make a dude. Name: Samuel (Sam) Scott Age: 17 Grade: 11 race: Shifter Appearance: Sam's pretty tall, ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: The Darker Side of The Street
Nutty, my character will be guitarist in the band :D
Nov 14, 2009
