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Re: House of Night
That sounds great, Bonnie. Ezra and Asher will still be friends etc etc. Also, is it OK if Ezra gets badly hurt?
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Re: Upcoming Mass Word War
YES. Be there or be square. :D
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Re: House of Night
Ezra - Demon Ezra winked and extended his hand to Serena. "Oh yeah, most people know me around the school." he joked. Koree laughed and Ezra felt the familiar twist ...
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Re: Hey! Look! It's a Kamas!
*fiddles with Ipod* Ooh, look! It's a touch!
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Re: Cruel
Hey there! This is a very nice poem! It's quite simple and short, but the message that's in it is quite powerful and you can get the emotion through the ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: Legos
Wow! This is really cute. It made me laugh, but as well as that it's pretty good technically wise. Your rhymes fit and the rhythm flows well. Personally, I love ...
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Re: Hello World
Hey there! Wow, so this is a pretty long poem! But it's kind of cute nonetheless. I'll just go through some nitpicks that I have. Earlier this morning I escaped; ...
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Re: The Darker Side of The Street
Sam - Shifter "I tried to ... stop them," Sam wheezed, trying to get his breath back, "But it was just me ... I couldn't hold them off." Hayley turned ...
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Re: Greensleeves
Hey there, Irish! Here as requested. Ok, so first off this was a lovely piece of writing! The overall tone and feeling of the piece was wonderful. You have a ...
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Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when a teacher marks your work and you mark her marking for grammar/spelling mistakes.
Nov 19, 2009 -
Re: The Darker Side of The Street
**Ugh. I posted a long thing for this but it deleted *head/desk* So here's my post take two** Sam - Shifter As soon as he heard the mental shout, Sam ...
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Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Ooooh, same contest as me. *narrows eyes* No worries, it'll be done by tomorrow! Kammie's is done, by the way! ~Amy
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Re: Hey!
Hi there, Tori! Welcome to YWS. *hands cookie* I'm sure that you'll love it here! And now I'll just go over the rules. 1) The 3:1 Ratio . Basically it's ...
Nov 19, 2009 -
Re: The Oddities Of Seattle
Java - Flight and Invisiblity Java tightened his arm around Lyanna's shoulders and leaned his head against hers. He was trying to stay calm throughout the whole thing, trying not ...
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Re: House of Night
Ezra - Demon Ezra nudged Asher and grinned at Alex and Koree. "We're going to find Andy. Howie thinks that she'll back off slightly if I have some man-power behind ...
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