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Short yet very easy to critique, okay here goes nothing. The men took hold of my left hand and my waist. One of them grabbed the flaming hot metal burners ...

Pretty long yet really well done, great job on this! Strong and effective you have to work on some of your sentence structures though excellent job! :elephant: :elephant:

Really good! I loved it deep and flowing keep up the good work!!! :elephant: :elephant: Here have two dancing elephants!

I've been waiting for this come out!!! And you didn't dissapoint me! This was really well written and just like the other one really well eplained good job! :elephant:

That's a really long poem, it must have taken for ever to rhyme the words...and stuff. I am not good at poetry and don't really like it but reading this ...

...These are really good poems (if they are please please please be poems) And if they are that was really well done. I mean some were so heart felt and ...

I use to have bad night mares to...oooo :!: this was really good! I felt slightly like this girl in the night amre department because I use to be so ...

Like I said before really good! :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: There my present to you (four dancing elephants...awesome!!!!)

WOW! That is really good, I mean it's really stong structure well planned out characters and a good start to any good book! Keep going I would like to find ...

My favourite character would haveto be cynthia though I do love the cat!!!! This was really well written and good work on it! I can't wait to find out more ...

This is really good! You did a great job writing and I didn't find any mistakes soI can't say much but yeah you did a realyl good job keep up ...

That was funny and good. I really liked it that was trully well written and you should be comended for it. Good work I saw no problems and think that ...

My friends loves lyrics and she said this was really good. I don't know much about lyrics but reading this I definiently think this is really good congratulations! :elephant:

Really good you explained everything in depth and were straight to the point good job in wirint this you are definiently talented keep going! I saw no problems in this ...

Good job you gave a strong meaning and paced depth in it giving it an unordinary twist making it remarkable. A few little grammar problems but nothing to bad so ...