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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hunted ch. 12

    Hellooo! ^.^ I'll be your reviewer today so I hope you're ready for an absolute fan-girl squeal because I just love this! Oh lordy, oh lordy! This is so good. ...

    Aug 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Everyday Survivors; prologue

    Hello, I'll be your reviewer today! Aren't you excited? Not really...? Dreamer, this is brilliant stuff. The emotion, the story telling, the MC and the mom...everything fit together so well ...

    Aug 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Hidden Flame: A dragon's secret Chapter 1 pt. 1

    Hey, I'll be your review today! This is a very good idea! When I first started reading I didn't quite get what it was going to be about though by ...

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: [void]

    But POD, you love to do it. Who cares what other people say!? If it's something you enjoy then you should continue on doing it. I've made so many mistakes ...

    Aug 16, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Teenager's Guide to Exorcism - Chapter Two (1)

    Hey, Apple here. There have only been two authors on this site that I have actually been certain will be as successful as JK Rowling and her novels: Harry Potter. ...

    Aug 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Dragonmaster Chapter 22: Nightmare

    Apple here, rearing to review. Happy August Christmas by the way, hoping your day is jolly! Nice work, man! When I first started reading about the unicorns I thought you ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: My Love Life

    Hey, Apple here. Nice start. I like the way you drew us in and to me, for some reason, the story had a kind of beige feeling. You know those ...

    Aug 13, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: All it Entails chapter 2

    I am not sure I understand what you're getting at here. Can the cat talk? Was that why Mia went running down the hallway? I am confused as to who ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Changing Shadows, Chapter Three

    Hey, Apple here! I don't believe I've seen you around YWS before. Welcome, from me! :D It's review day today and your story will be my fifth review. Exciting, isn't ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Troubled Sage and Sweet Caroline 0.2

    Happy Review Day! Cue the streamers and balloons! Yes, you're my fourth review for tonight. It's pretty sad considering that the counter for Review day is ticking quickly away, and ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Water Under The Bridge Chapter Ten: Ryan

    Congratulations! You're my third review for review day. Correct, it does seem pretty late and just three: that's dispicable, but you can't blame me, I've been out of the house ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Carry Me Home Chapter 15

    Howdy, Apple here. You're my second review for review day. I know it's sad but this is the only time I could manage to get on the computer because I've ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 5

    Apple here, howdy! Wow, that was very interesting. It had me on the edge of my seat from the moment I began reading. Your characters have definitely progressed and the ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: This is no longer a book!

    Hey AJ, here as I said. I know it's not exactly review day yet but I thought just in case Mum changes her mind about staying home, I might as ...

    Jul 30, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 19)

    Just on a first note, look how small my review is today. I blame you for this! It's only pink and prissy with fan-girl talking all the way through; not ...

    Jul 28, 2011


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