Apple

So I was surfing the web and I found this awesome show on youtube that explained, in a very hilarious way mind you, many different plots setings (horror, romance, sci-fi, ...

Something tells me you should have a deviantart account. I remember scrolling over your drawings the first time you posted and thinking cute. But then as you progressed, you only ...

You're in luck El, as I am from Australia. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for not thinking that we say Bonzer. No Australia I know ever says ...

Just on a first note, look how small my review is today. I blame you for this! It's only pink and prissy with fan-girl talking all the way through; not ...

Hey, Apple here. So I thought that I'd get straight into the review then lighten it up with all the parts of this story that I absolutely adored at the ...

Gabriel Gabe/Gabby Patterson: The wind whistled through my hair as we rode through the streets, Neo humming to the static coming from his car radio. Ever since the bombing, anything ...

Hey, Apple here. I think that you've done a really good job with the prologue here. What I see these days is people writing prologues and not taking in the ...

Five. I used to write these two sentence looking things and do a massive drawing to compensate for the white space in the page. I found one a few years ...

Hey, Apple here. I think me and the first reviewer differ very strongly. Firstly I thought this was one of your best chapters. It showed more closely how they react ...

Hmm, I would go with Bluerazors but since I'm already marked down for Ivory Fangs then that's fine. Also, I wanted to say welcome back to Sierra! :D I think ...

Gabriel Gabe/Gabby Patterson: They were just going to leave me there! Leave me as bait! What the hell, man? I was willing to join their cause and they were going ...

This was a really nice start but I am sorry, I have to be blunt and ignore your second post: this is just way to short to be anything. Now ...

Gabriel Gabe/Gabby Patterson: "No," I whispered staring at the car in front of me. Already stranger danger was whirring inside of my head though really when the world was destroyed ...

Wow, to me this seemed like a part in a story that was set just to explain a world. Hmm, as a reader I wouldn't reccomend it for a singular ...

Did I say three? Oh lordy, I did! Sorry, doing maths and writing at the same time are a terrible combination. I'll change it. :D