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What are you? Some kind of drawing master peice person? Why, I can't even draw a straight line without screwing it up (even when using a ruler). My God, I ...

As I say to everyone else who I review who hasn't asked me specicifally in my WRFF, I will do this without going through and nitpicking but just grab at ...

Anyone else? I'm raring for a review! LISTEN TO MY ENGINE BUZZZZZZ *Rummdidy rummdidy rumm!* :D

I wasn't going to do nitpicks but when I saw your tense work I couldn't help it. If you want proper nitpicks and such request in my WRFF thread as ...

Me! Me! Me! Rip it to shreds, become the shark!!!! Salem by Apple

This is chapter two actually as I took Skins advice and went straight to the point, but I am just saying it's chapter three because I don't want to muddle ...

Done both in half an hour, a record! Okay, so I've stopped crying for a little but I feel the tears coming again. Another review people and you won't have ...

As requested, I am here. I just read over this and I know that I'm not going to be much help as it is already great. But anway, I'll try. ...

I.Nitpicks: GWENDOLYN sweeps past it, smartly dressed , and on her way home from work. Instead of using a comma, I suggest you use and. It fits well and makes ...

So, this to me is a very interesting idea. I won't bother going through nitpicks, though I will help you try and improve what you already have. (Sorry, only those ...

.... Anyone? *crickets chirp* Alright then. I'm going to cry and then I'm going to cry so much that the whole world floods and until I get a request you're ...

Ehh, sorry guys. I've been bogged down by homework so I haven't managed to post yet. I'll hopefully post tonight, but don't get angry if I don't. Buzz- You can ...

Fin!!! Anyone else???? :D You know you want to, posttttt!!!!!!!!!!

Roal - BUDDY! What's going down? Yep, as promised, I am here to review your work. Cassa de Review-ae never turns down a review no matter how big or small. ...

Done-done-done-dedy-done-done!!! :DDD I actually finished this a long time ago but forgot to mention. Does anyone else want a review? Rollllll up people and do not be afraid. I may ...