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I hope this is all okay. Except for one part, it's completely finished though I'll do that later. Name- Mason Clarke Age- Seventeen Appearance- As his picture, Mason has short, ...

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I've got one! Why do cows moo? Or Are fruit really fruit or are they aliens from another planet? Do those help at all or are they duds?

Ooh very nice. Great description, showing and not telling (which is a first and I must say *great*...this is a pretty darn great first novel! I guess I don't really ...

Alright I'm just going to mention that I do not deal with grammar/spelling in any way because by fixing it for you, you won't learn how to deal with it ...

Ooo, this looks like fun! Okay, here we go! I think that you'd have short honey brown hair that just nips the edge of your shoulders. You wear glasses and ...

Hello. I'll be your reviewer for today. Firstly, I do not do grammar, I just pick up a point that I don't feel fits and try and show you how ...

So, you probably don't know me because I've been off of YWS for a while now and I still am but -- I don't think you want to hear my ...

I've been asking so many people for drawings it isn't funny...okay, it is, but I just like seeing other people's drawing abilities. Oh and thank you in advance! Name: Glider ...

I'm a little confuddled to. What's happening? I've read the previous posts but it doesn't want to sink: like Ally, could someone bring Eddy (Eden) in?

This is going to be short because I have to the lake soon and everyone is getting impatient. AUSTRALIA DAY, PEOPLE! :D Everyone else excited? Eden: Kaiter and I left ...

First day of senior school yesterday, sorry I didn't post. Anywho...here I am! You've guys have been busy so I hope this works. I don't exactly know what is happening ...

Is there room for one more? :D

Wow, this was great though I don't think your title flatters your writing genious. History sounds bland and plain, and your story frankly isn't. I haven't really got any suggestions ...

>>Weee we're starting! :D I didn't know what to write, so I hope this is okay. Eden: You know how they say being stuck in a box isn't the worst ...