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Well at least you're taking it better then some. It's a big thing. I know, where do I get off telling you that but really congratulations. I hope you, your ...

Full Name: Luke Pettaworth Age: Between fifteen and sixteen. Appearance: Luke looks like your average surfer dude. With blonde hat hair, and quirky blue eyes that look like the ocean ...

Will post a profile later! A boy...most probably, or what ever is lacking. Watch this spot for a profile! EDIT: Who majors in track!

So here is my idea: a crazed fan of Suzanne Collin's Hunger Games series decides he wants to experience the books first hand so he decides to begin the Hunger ...

Firstly hi and secondly scrap the prologue and mush these two together because they just sound great. Your first chapter is pretty small, I'm just going to add, and with ...

I love you! There is no other way to put it. I've been looking for drawing tutorials since forever because let's face it, I have about as much artistic talent ...

I believe there is one day to go till dealine! YEEE!

Thanks Jas, I'll try that also.

Definitely research America before you do anything. Making up places will not work unless it's a small little country village, otherwise if your characters are going to encounter cities then ...

Interesting, definitely! I am starting to really like this Celvin boy, he's got the makings of a great MC. This is more of a fan-girl yarn then a review because ...

Favourite food, what favourite food? I don't have a favourite food only $100,000 which I am about to buy a motorised scooter with. Toodles, that'll be its name! What if ...

Woah girl, five chapters in one, that's a little much. Why don't you start a novel/novella and place these chapter seperately; it'll make it a lot easier for people to ...

Thank you so much Snoik for the advice! And yes, a writer on YWS; who would've thought. Anyway, I'll take your advice and learn to juggle slowly and maybe one ...

Never say that you're a bad writer because that's not true. There really is only two types of writers: inexperienced and experienced. All you really need is a little practice. ...

Right so I've been writing this book and I really like the idea but I'm so confused about this and that and right now I'm just about ready to tear ...