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Re: Um, Hi *smiles shyly*
Welcome to the great world of YWS. Where the street lamps glow green, and the cows and geese come in many numbers. Why do we have cows and geese you ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 17)
Alright, so I waddle in here expecting to see class A work but when I start reading with my fake glasses, eyebrows and nose and I see A +++ work ...
Jul 21, 2011 -
Re: Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry (Closed)
Save a spot. Will post a profile when I'm finally let out of school. :D For a male character, I think.
Jul 18, 2011 -
Re: 3002 (Started) (Spots Open)
So Justy, when are we going to start this baby? :D I know it says August the 1st but can we really all stay sane till then? I don't know ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: Cosmos (Outer Space) Part 2
Hello, Apple here. So I was surfing the threads (literally) and I overcame this little doo-hicky. I opened it straight away and read from bottom to top without stopping. And ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Burning chapter 3
Hello, Apple here. I really like your story. Straight away when I started reading I was pulled in -- from the first chapter -- and sent on a magical journey ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: All Important Groundwork
Thanks so much! This will definitely be helpful for when I start writing the third re-write of my story. I know three but what can you do when a story ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: Red View High: Vamps Take over
Hey, Apple here. What have you done here, Pixie? You've added bits of coding which in writing the chapter you never should use. Don't worry, I am here to help ...
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: Major Revision in Novels
I am definitely favouring this on my computer so I can zip back to it later. I know just how you feel, I've written books with 90,000+ words and when ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Witchy - ness Chapter 1
Heyo, Apple here. It sounds like a Disney movie. I love Disney movies! Your narrative voice is hilarious and Jinx is just the strawberry to top the cake. I really ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Keeper Chapter five
Hello, Apple here. I like your idea. You have a very unique writing style that draws me in and keeps me reading right to the very end. You also add ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: This is no longer a book!
Hey, Apple here. That was powerful stuff right there. I am listening to a song right now and I think it fits your story perfectly; sorry that's not really relevant. ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Removed.
Wow, this is different, I've never seen a novel like this. Are you planning on making it like this for ever on? Or is this just showing the characters that ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Human Clay
I've read poetry before and none has ever had an effect on me. Literally, I never feel anything. But yours, yours was brilliant! I was capitvated from the very start ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare (Part 16)
Ah Skinsy, you good writer you! As always I find myself holding a hatchet ready to maul apart your story only to find that there is nothing to maul because ...
Jul 10, 2011
