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  • Fantasy Novels Re: I Need You To Write. - 8.

    Good job, this is really good. I really enjoyed it, you are a really good writer. Your characters were written well and I couldn't find any grammatical error (I suck ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Scripts Re: Timepiece (Scene Three)

    I don't really read scripts and am not one for plays but this was really yell wrote. I don't see any failure, it could've beena bit longer other wise no ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Silver Blade Chapter One- Part Three

    This was really good, I havenit read the others so I didn't understand it well but still really good job on writing. YOur sentence structure was strong and you explained ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The Diary of Kidnapping....Chapter 1

    Month: January Day: 24 Year: 2010 Dear Mimi, I don't know what is happening anymore! One second I am sitting on the floor to my room the next I am ...

    Jan 23, 2010
  • Archive Re: The Witchers

    Name: Prin Citen Age: 19 Gender: Female Personality: Childish and bubbly she never backs down from a fight and isn't afraid of physical work. She hardly ever gets nervous or ...

    Jan 20, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Werewolves/vampires chapter 7

    What is the shadowed figure?! Anyway really good you have to read over it and go over your mistakes and lengthen some of the words and make them sound a ...

    Jan 20, 2010
  • Archive Re: Plague of the undead

    Plague of the Undead War has broken loose through, the government is loosing power of its people, the world slowly falling into death's hands. Creatures of the darkest fantasies roam ...

    Jan 18, 2010


He who has a why to live for can bear almost any how.
— Fredrich Nietzche (Philosopher)