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Re: Pen to Paper
My friends loves lyrics and she said this was really good. I don't know much about lyrics but reading this I definiently think this is really good congratulations! :elephant:
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Re: Dichotomized chapter 1
Really good you explained everything in depth and were straight to the point good job in wirint this you are definiently talented keep going! I saw no problems in this ...
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Re: Abducted
Good job you gave a strong meaning and paced depth in it giving it an unordinary twist making it remarkable. A few little grammar problems but nothing to bad so ...
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Re: Timepiece (Last Scene)
Awwww I don't want it to end!!!! BUt otherwise really good job in creating this you really are good! :elephant:
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Anatomy of a Shooter [2]
Good work truly, I haven't read your other one so I guess I am going to right now...though....you wrote so well I thought I had read the first one trully ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Dreams
Wow that really moving. Good job!!!!! :elephant:
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: The White Knight Chapter Six Shariene
Like I said before great job you really write well, maybe one a you can become proffesionly your obviously have talent! :elephant:
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Search For Tony Chapter 3
Truly a good peice of work, you did awesomely in writing this! Keep writing more because I can't wait to read the rest. Good job this is truly good! I ...
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Re: The White Knight Chapter Five The Red Death Returns
This is really good, I have always liked fantasy and have been picky with what people write but this is perfect. Great job keep going, I can't find any mistakes ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Diary of Kidnapping...Chapter 2
Dear Mimi, I have been strikng against the hard wood door for most of the day, my heart beating against my rib cage violently trying to escape. My stomach has ...
Jan 24, 2010 -
Re: Monster - part 3
MONSTER!!!! It's really good awesome title and awesome story. Congratulations :elephant: !!! (Short yet effective comment!)
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Angels and Vampires-Part 9
A little small yet still rally good. The characters were strong and theme well known.
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Chapter 1.3)
GOOD WORK!!!! :elephant: I really liked it like I said before good job!
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Dark Tide (Chapter 1.2)
Good job! This is really good I am going to go read the rest so I understand it properly but otherwise this is really well done. It is thorough and ...
Jan 23, 2010 -
Re: Under the Moonlight: Chapter 2
Wow! That's all I can say. You did really good job at writing this congrats. I mean it was awesome sentence structure stong, I couldn't find any grammar or spelling ...
Jan 23, 2010