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I need advice and really badly; I am writing a vampire story (I know there are so many of those...) and I need to know a good way for a ...

Hi, I am going to be reviewer so here goes nothing: Here I stand, his eyes afire, his tongue ablaze, his hands alight. And only over a simple mistake. “Shut ...

Short yet very easy to critique, okay here goes nothing. The men took hold of my left hand and my waist. One of them grabbed the flaming hot metal burners ...

Chapter 1: Night Watch I stared up at the watch tower; moss covered the crevices with a dark green colour casting long shadows across the rain splattered cobbled stone streets. ...

Rem- I could hear all the moans coming from people around me. The lights above me flickered in their globes as a gust of wind wripped through the town. Turning ...

Can I please please please please please join this! Here is my profile anyway, if you don't like it I'll get rid of it. PS. have you watched .hack, cause ...

Rem- I stood and stared at the fire display whizzing around the centre of Dun Morgh, the village that supposedly was holding an event. The woman underneath the blaze of ...

Character Profile: Name: Rem Age: 16 Appearance: Eye Colour- Stone set blue. Hair Colour- A pinky colour. Height and build- He stands tall at 5'9 with a warriors yet assassin ...

Ren~ I watched as Samra flew up into the trees, losing herself in the thick vines her shadow vanishing from sight. The thought of loosing Prin made my heart skip ...

Prin~ I stared at the girl for a second, blinking rappidly. "You can tell me" she urged again giving a friendly smile. I began to blink even more rappidly my ...

Pretty long yet really well done, great job on this! Strong and effective you have to work on some of your sentence structures though excellent job! :elephant: :elephant:

Ren~ I blinked at the girl, my heart was thudding violently in my chest. I looked down at Samra blinking at her colourful scaled skin. She dug at my stomach ...

I'll join this if you are still up to doing it! :elephant:

Prin~ I stumbled out from the bushes pushing my way into the camp. Huffing I walked towards the outside sitting down lazily. This was just great! I stared up into ...

Prin~ I blinked slightly out from under my lashes smiling nervously at the ground. Tristan knew what was happening, he knew I was lying...damn it! I know I wasn't the ...