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Okay here we go............... What I place in red is grammatical errors and what I place in blue is just other things. Review for you Forward: Forward The night is ...

Abel~ I stared out at the woods, the large trees came up into the sky. Fog wrapped around the tree tops a mist forming above the ship. Stic stared out ...

Devi~ I sat on the back of the caravan. The red and gold cloth underneath ruffled in the wind as a gust struck the moving caravan. I frowned at my ...

When are we starting this?

Heyo there! What I write in read is grammar mistakes in blue is just add you fancy. I'll place an overall comment in the bottom. Okay I'll fix up the ...

Thanks guys for the help, truly apprectiated and just to tell you there is a dark skinned vampire (who has a high role) and he is awesomee.

Okay here goes nothing my profile!!!! If you don't like it I will get rid of it. I hope you don't mind I added more to your character Palette. :smt044 ...

That's really sad.... I loved it really that is so good...

Wow this is really good! As you already know I am really crappy at poetry so I can't edit anything but I can still say this is very good. And ...

I'M EDITTING YOUR WORK FOR YOU!!!! YAY ME!!! GO ME!!!! :smt064 What I place in red :smt013 are your mistakes and what I place in green :smt011 are just other ...

Character Palette: Name: Devi Serene Gender: Female Actor/Wolf: Actor Talent: Lycannary Physical Appearance: -Height: 5'7 or 173 centimetres. She is rather tall for her age though most guys tower over

Heyo! Everything in red is going to be the corrections and in blue are just...stuff! Here goes nothing than...Don't get angry when I pick up on the smallest things! Okay ...

English Assignment: Analyse A.b. "Banjo" Pattersons poem, The Man from Iron Bark. Okay here goes nothing, I have an english assignment due in two days and I haven't even started ...

Alien Anarchy Plot: It's the year 2099. Earth has become unliveable. The carbon dioxide is growing and the temperature has grown to a schorching level. All humans have been evacuated ...

As good as the last. You truly have talent, I found no mistakes so there is no need me to do a full checky thingy! Can't wait for the next ...