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Re: young love
I truly love the simplicity in this poem yet the meaning it has is heavy on the heart. Really Good job keep it up.. I would like to see more ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Hello
I must say thanks for the warm welcome guys. I really do appreciate it >) See you around>)
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Tainted Blood Ch.1 Part 1
I find this very amusing! "I reflect on the nightmare that had come to haunt me these past few months. It always starts in a dark alley next to a ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: Falling
I find this piece brilliant, I love the way you made the story flow from the beginning to the end. Marvelous and it would be cool if you wrote more. ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Poets Academy Chapter 1
Thanks for the feed back I realized that, it was really a typo (sorry for the mistakes) And yes i will be writing more reviews. Again i appreciate it(Now to ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Why I'm considered a psycho... (Chapter one)
Really good I must say, I like how you started and explaining the character train of thought. It flow very nice, maybe some metaphors and more vocabulary would make this ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Hello
Hi I just found this site not too long ago and I found it interesting so I posted one of my pieces that I'm working on. I'll stay active :wink: ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: Poets Academy Chapter 1
---This is the first story i ever wrote....(I usually write poetry) Today is pretty outside, wiping the sweat off my face that keeps dripping every few seconds. While I'm laying ...
Oct 21, 2008
