AnonymousLight

I like it but if there lines were even it would have a better flow::). Other than that you did pretty good I like this part of your poem "Oh ...

*Please excuse me for my grammar and mistakes :? But I can't help it I feel like I must try! Chapter 2 As we walked towards the academy, we were ...

I appreciate for the feedback and honesty lol Snoink thanks for being honest and straight up .)

I'm pretty much speechless:O... Nice poem keep writing! (what you wrote actually made me think (hardly happens) )

2-3 days ago I made some1 mad..she hasn't spoke to me since I wrote this poem for her. Tell me what you think about it? you probably despite me But ...

haha thanks>) I tried to make it rhyme but i couldn't find the words so i tried to make it flow lol but I'm glad you love the poem heheh

Wow ..... I like, I like , and I like. I only read chapter 3 and this one I find it very amusing to flowed very well,the imagery was nice>) ...

This introduction is just right to me>) I find it very interesting from start to finish. I like the way you described the character and how he handled himself. It's ...

This poem is really interesting, No matter what you do there's always something you can think of to stop you from doing so.) well i enjoyed reading this poem... you ...

Thanks for the feedback, Ishryock2 I don't know how I come up with these words..I just do>)

Pretty well written. I enjoyed reading it; i don't have anything big to critic about this piece. Pure of heart is a good title and keep writing!

Wow this poem is very beautiful. I just can't find anything wrong with it lol. Your choice of words are felt, the emotion and feeling of overcoming with all your ...

For this poem I am about to show...Basically I just put myself in a woman's position and what her perception of beauty may be. It's something I never really tried ...

Wow i love your choice of words, it helps me pick the image in my head much faster "I am a gentle breeze. Not swift like you, but moving on, ...

Hmm I agree with the previous comment, kinda reminds me of one my styles! "Then they all get mad at me they put their hands in my face I cry ...