Anonymous

I walked outside to the school’s perfectly cut lawn as I had done every day. When I saw the crowd, I presumed it was nothing special, just another after-school fight. ...

Keeping to myself is hard, especially now God chose your life as a discard. What happened to happy, what happened to you and me? After you slipped away from me, ...

first I feel like you are talking about getting married. And it seems to me as if it is more of a poem that you would find by a poet ...

:cry: thinking about the memory thats left of you, thinking about the happy things we used to do, before you and your friends got bored, and you decided to start ...

first i would like to say something about your spacing. i don't know if you did it on purpose, but if not i would just like to say that it ...

this seems like something i would write when looking at my wrist and getting inspired at the same time in the first verse. then in the second verse i convey ...

i can feel the way that the poet feels like something is her fault about the breakup that she had and feels like she has to beat herself up over ...

It's wonderful! I wish I was good at art. *sighs*

My sister has. She is simply CRAZY about them, haha. But, no, I haven't read them, though by the way she talks about the series, I should read them!

Thanks, Sometimes, I didn't notice that before. :D

hey, I thought I's return the favor of reviewing one of YOUR works since you helped me with mine! So I really liked this, you did an excellent job! I ...

A tiny "M" is tattooed on each one, If you open a bag I'll guarantee fun. So many bright colors I think I'll go blind, To eat red or blue ...

I loved that! Thought I wasn't sure how raindrops spiral, the ending really finished it off well. Well done all together!

wasn't bad... She hated every moment of her job. I think you could have made it so that the character shows how much she hates her job instead of stating ...

Thanks sweetcapris, I knew I needed to change something....how's it now, do you think?