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That was really emotional. You and Mr. B must have been really close. I've been close to a few teachers, but there's no way I'd be this.. open about how ...

Aww that's cute, and very creative. I'm sure if Voldemort was faced with a kitten he'd rather let Harry kill him than pet it.. :lol: Good job!

Again, I'm pretty much speechless. I think my eyes are bleeding. Just kidding. Anyways, maybe I'm biased because I love Twilight, but besides the fact that it didn't use the ...

I didn't like this. You used extremely short, choppy sentences, especially in the second paragraph. The grammar was awful. The part about Ron's uncle seemed way too long, cut it ...

I..basically I was horrified. I know you just did it for fun, but there was little content in there that had anything to do with the book. I didn't find ...

Are you going to continue writing this? Now I want to know what happens next!!!!!

I LOVE HARRY POTTER and you have a very interesting point here! Awesome!!!!

I was hoping it would be sad, because if you think about it, the topic of world problems is sad! Thanks for the crit though!

Over all I loved it, but there are grammar mistakes and such that I just have to fix. :wink: I'm all about grammar and spelling and how words flow....not that ...

Okay, this isn't supposed to rhyme...though I figure you could guess that.. :P but help me out with this..I don't think it flows well. Feel free to rip it apart. ...

Wow, I love the last photo in particular because it looks so peaceful and the light blends everything together perfectly. Love it!

Wow! It looks so cool!

Personally, I really liked this story, but, maybe you should point out in the beginning that the last thing the character remembers was a flash of bright light, for example, ...

I would just like to know WHY she died. Simply being unhappy isn't an excuse, and maybe shedding some light on that would be helpful.

Hmm... my suggestion is to put something about the adrenaline the character is feeling while they are running. Just a thought.